I think I did create a cohesive reading experience for my audience. I was clear and concise with very organized sections of writing. I think this will make a good first half of my paper. I made some major changes in the way I ended my paper so it ran smoothely into the next section. I will still have to make some major changes to my “methods” section in the future. I need to work more on writing an effective methods section and find out what most importantly needs to be there. I will go on to results and discussion followed by all the data I will collect. At this point I am feeling good and am confident that it will all run smoothely.
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